Hi Rian I really enjoyed reading about you going swimming everyday,i also love swimming everyday at school.i enjoyed that you described the strokes that you do practice eveyday.good work. Liam Schwartz Kokatahi school
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Hi Rian
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading about you going swimming everyday,i also love swimming everyday at school.i enjoyed that you described the strokes that you do practice eveyday.good work.
Liam Schwartz Kokatahi school