Hi Rian. I like how you have put everything in categories. I like how you have made it pop with all the colours. The facts are good rich facts and give you a good picture. Maybe you could make the picture a bit bigger so we can see the penguin better?
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Hi Rian. I like how you have put everything in categories. I like how you have made it pop with all the colours. The facts are good rich facts and give you a good picture. Maybe you could make the picture a bit bigger so we can see the penguin better?
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