Monday, 12 August 2019

The Titanic

I was learning about the things that happened in the past.
I enjoyed painting my Titanic.
It was hard to take a photo of my painting because it was on the wall.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 August 2019 at 11:32

    That was a amazing story I would like to know what the bow of the boat means and the stern of the boat.You put allot of detail in you story and allot of capital letters and full stops,good punctuation.

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  2. Anonymous12 August 2019 at 11:36

    I found that story quite interesting but i did not get what stern and bow meant in this story of the titanic.The words that you use were very
    detailed and made a lot of scenes.

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  3. toma30 August 2019 at 11:08

    Hi this is Toma Cairo and Limhai from edmund hilary school we like how you drew and wrote the titanic story have a good weekend.

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